I’m Writing A Humorous Story, Plz Help?
February 15, 2010
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I ‘m writing a story about a guy, a clumsy, loner and kind of whiny guy who saw a girl in a coffee shop and fell instantly in love with her, what would be the most comical way to get her to talk to him? Especially if the girl is kind of independent and a bit arrogant (not in the worst way)and all. You, should he just stand up and start talking? This is not comical….anyway, please help me guys!!! Thanks
Categories: humorous story
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Tags: Help, Humorous, Story, Writing
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Dustin walked over to the girl. He managed to get across the room without mishap and sighed in relief. He leaned forward on her table, which tipped under his weight, so that he stumbled forward, face first into her lap, she screamed her chair tipping backward and when Dustin went to grab her to catch her he realized all he had was her tank top in his hand. He slapped his forehead with his hand, and before he could take his hand away she swiped at her nose and he did the same and she slapped his hand hard into his face. He tumbled back onto his butt and she swiped her ripped shirt from his fierce grip.
“Dip-wad.”
Didn’t mean you should use this but I couldn’t explain. Most of the time I think of something embarrassing that happened to me and make it bigger.
have him come by at closing time with his mom’s car, a Tico or a small Opel
then, have him act like a macho(but not offensive) trying to give her a ride home. after he makes a total fool of himself….. the ending is yours. 
anyway, try and write as many short stories as youan, with diffrent original ideas, start from a few words and build up a story. you’ll get experience in time, and originality:)
have her go up and say
hi, um sorry to bother you, its just your, err our orders got mixed up, thats my latte`
hahaha im laughing already lol
Read Terry Pratchett and Roald Dahl’s STUFF!!!!